Change of Force

By Coffee Mugg, published Apr 15, 2008
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Rating: 4.8 of 5


A glass barrier,
I reach out to touch beauty,
Closer existence.

The butterfly flies,
But how when your sleep prevails?
Easy, float to your love.

Camel crosses the road,
A perfect world no problem.
Don't try this at home.

When up is not up,
Don't have a frown, heart of love.
Roll over negative.

A powerful force,
In stride, irresistible.
Beauty amongst beast.

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Truly an inspiration to start my day (especially knowing the schedule ahead of me today), thank you for inspiring me this morning as ALWAYS! I love the variation and the don't try this at home, a phrase I use with my son on the silly things I do! Reminding me that he comes this weekend and that alone is reason enough to keep my hectic schedule and get Friday here! Then the turning to positive from negative, wonderful honest and truthfulness. Sometimes hard, the advantage is always grass is greener on the other side. Thank you again for the inspiration you always personally hit me with. I love your "slap in the face" to reality (of course never physical) to wake me up with my coffee cup! Thank you again. If only I could make it a schedule starting my new job today, and you to write everyday: to fit your poetry into the first part of my day as I used to do and am working to do as of today! Thank you Ken for who you are and who you have become, one of my closest dear friends, that knows m

Posted on 04/16/2008 at 6:04:49 AM

 
Very nice poem, Ken, such meaning to your words.+*+*+* ~ PEACE ~

Posted on 04/15/2008 at 5:04:30 PM

 
I like this one alot Mr. Coffee,,,,, artme

Posted on 04/15/2008 at 3:04:03 PM

 
terrific piece of writing...thanks so much

Posted on 04/15/2008 at 10:04:50 AM

 
Great job!

Posted on 04/15/2008 at 9:04:40 AM

 
Lovely job!!!!!! Ken, this is wonderful!!!!! ********************************************************************************************

Posted on 04/15/2008 at 9:04:43 AM

 
wonderful job Ken!!!

Posted on 04/15/2008 at 8:04:07 AM

 
i really liked that line "easy, float to your love" - nice work again!

Posted on 04/15/2008 at 7:04:22 AM

 
Very nice my friend, really like this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 04/15/2008 at 7:04:42 AM

 
Boo boo... of all of the poems you've written, I believe this to be one of my favorites.

Posted on 04/15/2008 at 6:04:29 AM

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