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Slumbers Embrace

By Layla Lair, published Apr 19, 2008
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Restless whispers
Impatiently await within the silence
Enclosing my heart in hushed promise
My dreams fill with voice and chaos

Pulling with utter anguish
Warm eyes enclose mine with longing
Filling my senses with breath and emotion
Consuming with the warmth of embrace

Shrouded with visions and weakness
My mind wanders and fills with sensation
Burning me with yearning so vibrantly rosy
Hopelessly deep and soundlessly I seep

Falling in a languid like slumber
Where I am forever lost
In a sea where I would gladly drift and drown
Breath cascades my flesh like perfections blush

Timelessly caressing
Total stillness surrounds

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Very nice!! Thanks for sharing this with us

Posted on 09/23/2008 at 11:09:18 AM

 
This was great - thank you!

Posted on 08/12/2008 at 2:08:52 PM

 
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Posted on 08/11/2008 at 8:08:17 PM

 
Reading your poem I experience a gentle breeze,hear a melodious music,bathe in a refreshing artisan spring.You generate an inner experience while I read your poem.This is called lyrical appeal and you are a perfect lyricist.Great!

Posted on 08/10/2008 at 6:08:17 AM

 
lovely poem, Layla

Posted on 08/06/2008 at 6:08:21 AM

 
:::

Posted on 05/23/2008 at 12:05:30 PM

 
Your poem has some hypnotic power over me. I was sitting here minding my own business thinking I'll read a couple more articles on AC then get up and play in my gardens. Now, I just want to take a nap.

Posted on 05/17/2008 at 9:05:50 AM

 
really nice poetry! beautiful.

Posted on 05/10/2008 at 11:05:31 PM

 
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 05/09/2008 at 5:05:35 PM

 
Very lovely poem. You have talent.

Posted on 05/05/2008 at 5:05:17 PM

 
Very lovely poem. You have talent.

Posted on 05/05/2008 at 5:05:16 PM

 
Very lovely poem. You have talent.

Posted on 05/05/2008 at 5:05:15 PM

 
I feel much as you describe when I slip away after a long, hard day. Beautiful!

Posted on 05/04/2008 at 10:05:25 PM

 
Very nicely written.

Posted on 05/03/2008 at 11:05:46 PM

 
this is nice. thanks

Posted on 05/03/2008 at 9:05:48 AM

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