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Day Versus Night

By Darlene Zagata, published Apr 22, 2008
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No peace is found in day or night
since you abruptly went away.
The light of day stings my eyes.
I am a wounded animal for all to see
seeking solace in the shadows
to lick the open wounds you left.
I turn from the sun's relentless eye
unable to look at the reflection I see
upon the water's rippled surface
like murky broth that settles slowly
over a drain that will not flow.

Night has lost its sanctity
that once I used to revel in.
The time when I would truly live
now only shudders in the dark.
Sleeping soundly is no more
since slumber took a different turn.
Lonliness is a deep cavity
that no filling can ever cure.
Fear settles like a woolen blanket
in wait for the dawn of a new cycle
where day versus night
but there is no victor
to claim the elusive prize.

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Just like all your other poems this one is lovely!

Posted on 07/03/2008 at 8:07:03 AM

 
LOVED THIS

Posted on 04/30/2008 at 1:04:08 PM

 
With Cindi: Truly heart-wrenching... Lovely work...

Posted on 04/29/2008 at 8:04:49 PM

 
I've felt and written similarly before. . .sometimes the sun's relentless eye can sting a little, but can also help heal the wounds faster than licking them. Don't give up and thanks for sharing!

Posted on 04/29/2008 at 2:04:41 PM

 
very nicely expressed !.......................

Posted on 04/27/2008 at 12:04:00 PM

 
Very powerful words. Brought tears to my eyes

Posted on 04/27/2008 at 6:04:20 AM

 
Very nice and lovely poem.

Posted on 04/27/2008 at 12:04:56 AM

 
Very very good one ,I could feel all the way....

Posted on 04/24/2008 at 8:04:05 AM

 
You sure have a great talent

Posted on 04/24/2008 at 12:04:41 AM

 
Good emotion in this poem, I love it :) Sheri

Posted on 04/23/2008 at 8:04:35 PM

 
Love love LOVE this!

Posted on 04/23/2008 at 3:04:10 PM

 
This is fantastic!!!

Posted on 04/22/2008 at 8:04:44 PM

 
I love this so much! WOW! ****************************************************************************

Posted on 04/22/2008 at 4:04:27 PM

 
I can feel exactly what you are expressing. Heart-wrenching but wonderful poem. +++

Posted on 04/22/2008 at 2:04:58 PM

 
So sad !!..But...tomorrow is a new day...I hope that you do find love again !!!

Posted on 04/22/2008 at 1:04:32 PM

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