Unfaithful Farmer

By Mandy Kaye, published Apr 23, 2008
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Planted seeds
never kept warm
Felt insecure
during a storm

Turned your back
on what you started to sow
Not standing firm
to see your gardens grow

Morning sun withered and
drank from our souls
Taking out of us
your unpaid tolls

Each night we would cower
in the mess that you left
Slowly repeating promises
never kept

Bound together
by our own desperate cries
That call for a mother
too distant for goodbyes

Ripe puawananga seeds

Credit: sanctuary.org

Copyright: sanctuary.org

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So you do know what happens when you neglect something or SOMEONE, Pretty crappy huh...........Keep it Ciil and don't forget about cetlain "Plants" that you might be loosing.

Posted on 04/28/2008 at 8:04:34 PM

 
I'm glad you got your muse back even though its a sad one. Uncared for and neglected, but the neglecter always has promises. This ones good and deep =).

Posted on 04/25/2008 at 9:04:43 AM

 
Where's the part about the whore and the elephant?? Very good all the same :) You can help me help them grow straight. We love you!

Posted on 04/23/2008 at 9:04:29 PM

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