IN MY HEAD

By Cindi Starr, published Apr 26, 2008
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IN MY HEAD

It lies in a dormant state,
Until one day it lashes out violently,
Exploding into a never ending battle,
Of self-loathing and hatred.

That despise of myself escalates,
Until it reaches new heights,
Of irrational thoughts and ideas,
That creates mayhem in my mind.

It then torments me like a captor,
Invoking thoughts of mutilation,
Infecting the constant suffocation,
Now awakened in my head.


The Wheels In My Brain Are Turning

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Good expression here

Posted on 05/06/2008 at 9:05:11 AM

 
Very thought provoking.

Posted on 05/04/2008 at 12:05:12 PM

 
Wow, the gears in my head are swelling, lol. Thank you all for you kind words and encouragement. I couldn't do it without all of you. DrD...your poem(comment) is perfect. Thank you. :-)

Posted on 05/03/2008 at 11:05:45 PM

 
Turn the gear one more time, throw the fear out of your mind. Don't give in to irrational lust, make new headway in loving trust. We all want more, but more isn't always fine, sometimes it is better just to calm our frenetic mind. -DrD

Posted on 05/02/2008 at 12:05:14 PM

 
VERY well done, and with a hypnotically appropriate photo to boot! David

Posted on 05/02/2008 at 8:05:17 AM

 
Powerful and great use of words.

Posted on 05/02/2008 at 6:05:47 AM

 
Powerful and heartfelt. Great job

Posted on 05/01/2008 at 11:05:46 PM

 
Very honest poem and you said much in few words. What a great choice of photo too. I do hope you have someone to reach out to if and when you feel this way...we all need that--though sometimes it may feel like no one is listening. Don't forget your fellow CPs that care about you too!!

Posted on 05/01/2008 at 8:05:50 PM

 
Wow, what an incredible piece o f writing..somewhat scary to think about

Posted on 05/01/2008 at 9:05:44 AM

 
wow great poem, very powerful!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 05/01/2008 at 8:05:50 AM

 
Interesting and deep!!!

Posted on 04/30/2008 at 3:04:08 PM

 
very creative

Posted on 04/30/2008 at 2:04:08 PM

 
Wow. I hope you got things worked out. Blessings to you!

Posted on 04/30/2008 at 12:04:01 PM

 
Great poem. very heart felt.

Posted on 04/30/2008 at 10:04:39 AM

 
I am able to relate to this! gr8 job!

Posted on 04/30/2008 at 9:04:50 AM

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