Evelyn

I had this fantasy of mine.
So real, I felt it.
It is as to an unborn
child-a Daughter.
whose "being" was a
wonder worthy of
proclaiming.

Her arrival into the world
was momentous. Swallowing
all grief and misery.
Her tiny being so fragile, yet
so strong. I am overwhelmed.
As I swayed her lightly side-to-side,
her little finger sought to encircle
mine, and I could do naught but
mutter her name: "Evelyn."

A miracle bestowed
upon me.

Evy's infancy was life-revealing.
So much one can share with a
little girl.
Her smile so enchanting, her
comical guise so endearing,
her cry so exclaiming,
and her first word: "Dada,"
mind-blowing.
My fortunes are boundless.

Evy became a petite girl of six.
Her brightness matched her prettiness.
Memorising was a hobby.
Then is doll play.
The sight of her scampering
off to school as she
utters: "Daddy, luv you,"
each time leaves me
swooning with adoration..

Evy was in her teen years.
She was tall and lovely,
but strong-willed.
It was challenging, but daddy
is firm, nevertheless loving.
Her first date and first kiss
we both went through.
She is a friend I will
shield from all fiends,
for her worth knows no
end.

Evy was a college graduate.
A degree in Arts.
As she gallantly sauntered
on the podium to claim
her credit when called
upon, daddy was breathless
with an elating pride.

Evelyn; a woman.
A woman on the verge of
marriage to a man like
her father: caring, devoted
and handsome.
Walking her down the
aisle, I am enveloped in
a joy that manifest
in trickle of tears.
It was sheer happiness.

With this, I stirred from my reverie,
with a contentment for who
is to come with an
intense paternal instinct.

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beautiful poem.

Posted on 05/22/2008 at 9:05:31 PM

Beautiful and heartwarming.

Posted on 05/01/2008 at 5:05:21 AM

You have inspired me. I have a daughter who is now a woman, so I know exactly what it was like and what you mean. I wrote a poem about her many years ago and though it is very different from yours I think I will find it and send it in. June

Posted on 04/30/2008 at 9:04:37 AM

It's okay but if you'd submitted it, say to a magazine, it would have been edited. I guess it's one of your very first or the very first. There is much emotion and excitement in it, as if you were swept off your feet writing it. The best method is to wait a few days after completion, read it again (no need to show it to anyone - be your own judge!), and then revise if you think it should be revised, or just give it the few last touches. I liked you enthusiasm and optimism, you do have a talent and keep developing it. Haim

Posted on 04/29/2008 at 12:04:08 PM

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