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The Man in My Life

By LittleLulu13903, published Apr 30, 2008
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I have a man in my life.
He is perfect in every way.
When I mess up,
He does not put me down.
He loves me unconditionally,
Even when sometimes I do not love Him back.
He helps me with all my problems.
He is there for me,
Even when I want to be alone.
He always listens to me,
Even when I am telling Him about my problems.
He sees me as a beautiful woman,
ven though I have many flaws.
Yes, the man in my life is perfect in all ways,
Including the holes in his hand and feet.

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I thought this was a typical love poem until I got to the end, nice twist!

Posted on 05/03/2008 at 4:05:06 AM

 
Beautiful!

Posted on 05/02/2008 at 9:05:15 AM

 
Great poem !......................................

Posted on 05/02/2008 at 12:05:50 AM

 
Yes. It is Jesus. Thank you. Now I wish I could write poems like this all the time. These came to my mind a few years ago. Well I will have to try more.

Posted on 04/30/2008 at 11:04:50 AM

 
Is the man you are referring to Jesus? Am I interpreting this poem correctly? Either way this is a great poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted on 04/30/2008 at 7:04:15 AM

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