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Holding On

By Katy Berezny, published May 12, 2008

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I see it
Can't grasp it
Like a cloud
I reach out to touch it
It runs through my fingers
Like the wind
I can feel it
Yet I can't see it
It is real
Yet I still have to convince myself
Can't let go of something that is a part of me
Even when you can't beHold it
It is always there
Then you don't have to let it go
Give it to God
He will take care of it

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Bridgitte Williams

Very beautiful, I loved the last lines especially. :-) Gorgeous picture.

Posted on 05/13/2008 at 12:05:04 PM

Nneka Onu

So so true! Remember the lilies of the fields, and the birds of the air scene in the Holy Book? Well done, and perfect pix to go with it.

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 9:05:02 PM

Artme

cool pic. I like your poem a lot too artme....

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 9:05:02 PM

this one rings true.

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 8:05:31 PM

The King's Princess

:) thanks you all

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 6:05:16 PM

Phenomenal! This reminded me of give your worries and cares to God. I know when I do, I feel like a brick house was lifted off of my shoulders!!!

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 6:05:46 PM

RM Gal

Beautiful poem and imagery.

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 1:05:38 PM

Kady the Hippie Woodstock

This is so beautiful!!!!! Great job on this one!!!!! :)

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 1:05:16 PM

Fantastic!

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 9:05:46 AM

I love this one !!!...very beautiful !!!

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 8:05:03 AM

Charlie K

This is beautiful.

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 8:05:41 AM

SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA

Very nice poem, very heartfelt.

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 7:05:45 AM

mimpi

Don't have to let it go.....darling.....God will take care for sure. love.......

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 5:05:38 AM

Samantha Cummings

Nice. :-)

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 5:05:29 AM

;-):-)

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 4:05:43 AM

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