Walk It

Haiku Poem

By SkyeDanzer, published May 12, 2008
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Rating: 4.7 of 5
Walk It

Walk it out my friend,
Don't listen to the ramblings,
He has no peace now.

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Short and poignant. Thanks for sharing.

Posted on 05/18/2008 at 1:05:26 PM

 
cute !..........................

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 8:05:46 PM

 
cool

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 2:05:30 AM

 
Don't listen to the ramblings ;-) 5 stars

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 9:05:32 PM

 
i know this is supposed to be a haiku---but i think you should add other haiku-like verses. however i do like this! :) good work!

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 7:05:43 PM

 
I LOVED THIS ONE, NEEDED THIS ONE, ONE OF YOUR BEST I THINK, THANKS

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 5:05:04 PM

 
cute!

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 11:05:48 AM

 
:D

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 11:05:47 AM

 
Short but to the point. Thanks

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 9:05:23 AM

 
Great haiku, nicely said!!

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 9:05:54 AM

 
Good advice!

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 8:05:30 AM

 
Great Haiku! I love how Haiku's are short and to the point. Terrific job on this

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 5:05:15 AM

 
I guess you should concentrate more on Haikus (you are great with it) until you get better with fingers. LOL...take care...

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 5:05:44 AM

 
beautifully expressed, profound and lovely!

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 5:05:10 AM

 
A little bit short but beautiful words and content in this poem

Posted on 05/12/2008 at 5:05:12 AM

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