Smiling Places

By Viktorya Hale, published May 13, 2008
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Looking to the corner
Her whisper, turning

To smiling, yearning
Looking to the corner

Gracefully arms folding
Her hand, reaching

She smiles, teaching
Gracefully arms folding

Turning and meeting
A familiar smile

Life worthwhile
Turning and meeting

In's and out's
Swinging and swaying
To life's beats
Like missing to find
A perfect pace
Never skipping, retreat
Smiling places

Smiling Places

my friend from Tennessee and I (3 years ago when I went to visit her)

Credit: kberezny

Copyright: kberezny

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very warm poem and full of love i really liked it.peace

Posted on 07/07/2008 at 10:07:09 PM

 
AW...this made me smile! :-) Excellent.

Posted on 05/25/2008 at 8:05:31 PM

 
You are so beautiful, Katy and so is your friend! Great job!

Posted on 05/16/2008 at 9:05:05 PM

 
Lovely!

Posted on 05/16/2008 at 7:05:46 AM

 
I like Smiling places ARTME

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 6:05:24 PM

 
beautiful pix! beautiful poem! well done Kat!

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 11:05:35 AM

 
This is just lovely, Katy.

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 8:05:27 AM

 
:-)

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 5:05:34 AM

 
This is beautiful !! such a blessing it is to have a friend !!

Posted on 05/13/2008 at 7:05:33 PM

 
Lovely. I enjoyed the happy rhythm of the poem that aptly fit the words.

Posted on 05/13/2008 at 7:05:04 PM

 
Very charming!

Posted on 05/13/2008 at 6:05:11 PM

 
I absolutely loved this! Well done!

Posted on 05/13/2008 at 5:05:33 PM

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