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Now Immortal

By kimberly gray( lyricsingray productions), published May 14, 2008
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It only took 28,000 kills
each time i grew stronger
With each more a life mine grew longer

You see this vile that hangs from my chest
It holds the blood of my mortal father
Before he turned and took me even farther

Why do you ask me these ridiculous questions
Don't you fear your own life
The danger here carries 2 knives

I only hiss to flaunt my fangs
I worked hard for their length
They are my lifeline to strength

And now with the last kill
My blood runs light
combined with many a lustful fight

Your weak and still mortal
I am no story nor tale
I exhaust as you can see, I stand here so pale

Hear me, stop looking at me
I am not a freak
You deserve to see this erotic peak

Is it that you want to observe
Or do you taunt me out of spite
Warning, you won't with me, be able to fight

My story is irrelevant
My success is now the victory
Not many have killed as I in immortal History

I will celebrate in pure desire
I will drain you soon
I will kill you here in this room

Slowly accurately and privately still
Your pain will paralyses you
It is the order of procedure I do

As you fade remember this
It was you who did insist
Knowing full well you would die in my kiss

Takeaways
  • A vampires victory kill as she explains it to a mortal being
Did You Know?
Becoming Immortal seems to be just the beginning
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Boy am I the happiest girl on here today HIP HIP HURRAY FOR KIMBERLY GRAY BACK!

Posted on 06/27/2008 at 3:06:05 PM

 
Awesome!!

Posted on 05/15/2008 at 4:05:10 PM

 
i have to add another WOW :D

Posted on 05/15/2008 at 7:05:17 AM

 
Excellent fighting attitude! Say goodbye to all that was!

Posted on 05/15/2008 at 5:05:55 AM

 
Double WOW!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 05/15/2008 at 3:05:24 AM

 
wow.

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 8:05:20 PM

 
Powerful!

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 8:05:46 PM

 
WOW!!!!!! WOW!!!!!! :)

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 7:05:05 PM

 
Amazing!

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 7:05:44 PM

 
Another one that shows your talent ...........................

Posted on 05/14/2008 at 7:05:16 PM

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