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The Ultimate Revenge

By M. Eileen Burston, published Jun 19, 2008
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I have wounds upon my soul,
No, life is never fair.
But, I can't let your will control
The pain I cannot bear.
So, today, I take revenge
For what you've done to me.
You didn't crush me. I shall mend.
I'm going to be free.

If I give up, you will win.
So, I must carry on.
I choose to let my life begin.
My courage is not gone.
Victory is learning how
To live, like I am whole.
Living in the here and now,
And striving for some goals.

If I stay where I have been,
And give the fear control,
I'll never be my own friend.
You'll own part of my soul.
Now, I choose to change those things
That lie within my grasp.
I'll mount up, as if with Eagle's wings,
And overcome the past.



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WOW I LOVE THAT POEM YOUR RIGHT THE BEST REVENGE IS SUCESS... LOOKING AT IT THAT WAY MAKES A BIG DIFFERENT AND IT HELPS ALOT.. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THAT WITH US....

Posted on 06/22/2008 at 8:06:32 PM

 
So well stated. I was fearful that you would speak of revenge in the traditional sense. I see, clearly, that you see "revenge" as I do. There is no revenge as sweet as succeeding when they think success is not possible.

Posted on 06/22/2008 at 7:06:18 PM

 
Yep.. best revenge is sucess!!! Even if it is just moving on and being happy..

Posted on 06/20/2008 at 10:06:07 PM

 
Beautiful poem. I especially love the ending. Thank you for sharing.

Posted on 06/20/2008 at 2:06:20 PM

 
Victory !!!....this is a healing poem !

Posted on 06/20/2008 at 5:06:31 AM

 
You go girl.... artme some-more-wonderful poems...........

Posted on 06/19/2008 at 4:06:27 PM

 
Love it! So true and beautifully written . . .

Posted on 06/19/2008 at 3:06:11 PM

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