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Debitum Naturae

By Stephanie Alford, published Jun 20, 2008
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I lie submerged under the cold soil
The stiffness has set in
I look up
All I see is darkness
My heartbeat no longer present
But the ache remains
The solitude continues
Alone in death
Just as I was in life
Nothing ever changed
Loneliness my constant companion
My best friend
The only think I had to rely on
Is the one thing I never wanted


 
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I feel the lonlieness of your poem. I wonder about the line, The only think I had to rely on Is the one thing I never wanted beautifully written,

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Posted on 07/10/2008 at 6:07:43 PM

 
Wow very deep poem excellent writing!!!!!

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Posted on 06/25/2008 at 7:06:47 AM

 
I wonder if this will be true for us when we pass on...If there is an afterworld, I hope all those who have been in terrrible pain will not have to suffer any more. Very deep, Steph, very deep. . . .

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Posted on 06/24/2008 at 10:06:58 PM

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