Do Not Comment!!

Four Verses of Some Fellings from Weeks Ago! Comment All You Dang Well See Fit!!

By Donald Pennington, published Jul 05, 2008
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Folks. This isn't about anybody anymore. And...on top of that, I'm so 'over it' that I wouldn't say their name anyway. I just don't wanna waste how funny the muse sounds when grumpy!

And no...It's not about the ex!

The venting side of creativity can be fun too!

Do not comment.
Do not write
Any thoughts for me. Tonight,
Leave me alone
In my dark light.
And I do not want to
Hear your plight.

Do not comment.
Don't wanna see
What you even think of me.
When pointing at you
Turns out there's three
Curving directly
Back to me.

Do not comment.
I'm not blind.
I'm just a fool who forgot his lines.
Let's just invest
What's left, of my time,
Into those of you,
The first of my kind.

Do not comment.
You can't even say
That you love my work today.
I see now clear:
To you it's play,
That on your behalf,
I wasted days.

Do Not Comment!!

Happy little penguin. Aint he?

Credit: Mary Simmons

Copyright: Mary Simmons

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Posted on 08/30/2008 at 10:08:09 PM

 
Love the poem...i feel like this too some days!

Posted on 08/09/2008 at 2:08:13 PM

 
this is fantastic - really - the emotion coming through gets you do you read Kandinsky ever? He'd get it.

Posted on 08/04/2008 at 10:08:06 PM

 
lol and this is why I do not put my fiction on line cuzl the comments would hurt my feelings... lol love this one Don thanks

Posted on 08/03/2008 at 2:08:46 PM

 
This is a really great poem...hummmm who are you talking about?...no comment !...:))

Posted on 07/26/2008 at 10:07:06 AM

 
I wasn't going to comment until I read M. Eileen's comment. And then I looked and did not see what she saw and I was sad. So, I read your poem again, and while I wasn't glad, I did laugh at the thought of comments I've had.

Posted on 07/21/2008 at 4:07:54 AM

 
......shush....

Posted on 07/16/2008 at 4:07:54 AM

 
no comment

Posted on 07/12/2008 at 8:07:16 PM

 
Couldn't keep quiet...I enjoyed this.

Posted on 07/11/2008 at 5:07:48 AM

 
No comment.

Posted on 07/11/2008 at 5:07:55 AM

 
you and baconator are crackin' me up! yes---all of these comments are figments of your overactive imagination. i think i even imagined what i saw before.

Posted on 07/10/2008 at 10:07:13 AM

 
M. Eileen...LOL!! Thank you for pointing that out. I needed that.

Posted on 07/10/2008 at 10:07:09 AM

 
M. Eileen: I want to see what your seeing! LOL! Oh but wait.. Donald.. you are not reading this, because this is not another non-comment like the one you imagined the last time you looked when you imagined I was here commenting but it was just a mere illusion.. a figament of your imagination, wishful thinking, or what ever delusions you were/are having in your head thinking I am here commenting when I am not!

Posted on 07/10/2008 at 6:07:11 AM

 
i can't help but to laugh--as i look at the tab at the top of the page. associated content is abbreviated as 'Ass.' so--i read it as 'do not comment, ass'! gee, thanks!

Posted on 07/10/2008 at 1:07:16 AM

 
No Comment lol. Cool Poem and Penguin!!!!!

Posted on 07/09/2008 at 10:07:42 PM

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