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Hold My Hand

By Lisa Renee., published Jul 13, 2008
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Hold my hand;
For I am afraid;
I am sinking;
Into the dark cold waters;
Of the raging sea;
Lift me up;
From this bottomless pit;
The walls are so high;
And my ladder has no rungs;
Kiss my face;
And pull me close;
Can you not see?
That my heart is broken;
Wrap me tightly;
In your strong, loving arms;
So that my body;
Can cease its shaking;
Speak to my heart;
In your sweet, gentle voice;
For I am so lonely;
Bandage my deep wounds;
My soul is bleeding;
Gently remind me;
That you really love me;
Because sometimes I wonder;
As bitter tears fall;
Lift up my cross;
From my aching shoulders;
I cannot bear it;
All by myself anymore;

Hold My Hand

How easy is it to forget in our darkest moments, that we are never really alone.

Credit: Lisa Renee

Copyright: Lisa Renee

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I like this one as it gets stronger with each line. I hate the punctuation, but love every line.

Posted on 09/16/2008 at 9:09:14 PM

 
Wonderfully written. :-)

Posted on 07/27/2008 at 9:07:14 AM

 
Awesome work as usual!

Posted on 07/23/2008 at 7:07:54 PM

 
Hi didi, Why are you feeling alone ? Nice work on expression of your feeling !

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 12:07:01 PM

 
you are not alone ...inside , i love the poem ...... and love the pic...too artme

Posted on 07/14/2008 at 9:07:17 PM

 
Nice art work. Powerful and touching poem, and beautifully written.

Posted on 07/14/2008 at 3:07:44 PM

 
Great poem

Posted on 07/14/2008 at 6:07:36 AM

 
Cathie is right. You are NEVER alone.

Posted on 07/13/2008 at 5:07:19 PM

 
Great poem and great picture!

Posted on 07/13/2008 at 3:07:06 PM

 
ESPEC:That my heart is broken; Wrap me tightly; In your strong, loving arms; So that my body; Can cease its shaking; Speak to my heart MY FAV

Posted on 07/13/2008 at 2:07:24 PM

 
E.X.C.E.L.L.N.C.E. EXCELLENCE

Posted on 07/13/2008 at 2:07:48 PM

 
You are never alone !!!

Posted on 07/13/2008 at 12:07:10 PM

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