In the Name Of

By Norman A. Rubin, published Jul 16, 2008
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"In the Name of the Holy One, the All Merciful, the Compassionate and Blessed... ", whispered the nervous young man prayed as he headed towards a boarding bus stationed in the busy terminal near the Israeli town of­­­­_____. The heat of the summer's day caused profuse sweating on his heavily burdened body. The dynamite and sharp metal filled harness strapped to his chest weighed heavily, and it roughed the skin under the cloth of his dress. His steps were measured as he neared his target; each step marked with an oath of prayer. He stopped suddenly as two armed figures, uniformed in the official olive green of the border police, neared him.

He feigned indifference to their presence, only passing a fake identity card when requested. One policeman slowly moved away from him, but the second, dark in Ethiopic skin, searched, with suspicious eyes, the bulk of his body. Panic ensued as a command was ordered by the lawman. The young man hurled a loud cry to the Enlightened One as he set the switch, which triggered the explosive device. .

Paradise wasn't the reward offered the suicide bomber, but only the corruption of scrambled body tissue, sinew and blood, which fouled the air with their stench, and the ground with their ugly sight. Prayers to the Blessed and Compassionate were not heard; only shouts of panic from the passengers boarding the waiting bus and the sound of wailing ambulances, summoned to the scene, could be discerned. The young man's torn body was not near rivers of flowing water or covered by numerous houris and will never be. If he could feel after death, he would of felt religious men, of a different calling and tagged with official markings, collecting and scraping his skin, bones and innards into plastic bags. Foul death he received and needless death was hurled upon the young officer, dark in skin, now lying under a covered sheet.

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This is so sad.

Posted on 08/01/2008 at 8:08:07 AM

 
The last sentence is very powerful. It is the children on both sides of the conflict who suffer most. May peace soon descend on the entire Middle East!

Posted on 07/31/2008 at 6:07:27 AM

 
Personally, Norman I have had to read this a few times in order to take it all in. While I do sympathize with the Palestinians and thier plight I cannot help but think that they should spend more time working on thier own infrastructure and caring for thier people than sending off thier young men and women to die for a cause that is only certain to bring retribution from Israel. I hope I have this right and that I am understanding correctly. It is my understanding that when Israel was reborn, there were people in the land, but the area was very sparsely inhabited. It was the expulsion of the Palestinians from Lebanon that created the refugee camps in the West Bank. Since I am a Christian I do believe that the rebirth of Israel in the land is a fulfillment of Prophecy and because I do believe that, I do not believe that one can fight the will of God. This story is tragic indeed and it is with my whole heart that some semblance of peace can be reached, but I do not believe that it will.

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 3:07:41 PM

 
Sorry, Norman, I can't agree with the rest of your readers. I can't like this story. It's hard enough to see and hear about the waste on the news. I don't want it in my fiction.

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 8:07:52 AM

 
Marvelous work here!

Posted on 07/19/2008 at 5:07:40 AM

 
Empathy is not as common a trait as some may think, but you have it in spades, Norman. Thanks for writing this up! :o)

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 1:07:52 PM

 
The love and the pain in your heart have once again given us an example to learn from. Thank You fer sharin'. Mizpah. ;-}}>

Posted on 07/17/2008 at 10:07:01 AM

 
Great work; a very profound piece indeed.

Posted on 07/17/2008 at 8:07:44 AM

 
To all the wonderful people that have commented on my story I would like to express my appreciation...

Posted on 07/17/2008 at 5:07:49 AM

 
Very interesting story.

Posted on 07/17/2008 at 4:07:58 AM

 
You told a very beautiful story about a difficult subject, nice job and I do agree in the name of love wish it could stop

Posted on 07/16/2008 at 6:07:36 PM

 
I agree with ARTME. Excellent story.

Posted on 07/16/2008 at 2:07:05 PM

 
I can not help it ! In the Name Of Love , I wish it would stop....... i love your story

Posted on 07/16/2008 at 1:07:12 PM

 
Great job~!

Posted on 07/16/2008 at 11:07:43 AM

 
Wow. Such powerful words that could reflect todays happenings.

Posted on 07/16/2008 at 7:07:04 AM

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