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The Beginning

By C-Love, published Jul 18, 2008
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Emerging in the early calm
Dew lingering on grass
Darkness clinging to the horizon
If perfectly still, it can be felt

Having endured the perilous night
Survived countless near misses
Lived to tell of the attacks and attempts
It still remains, now reinforced

No matter what came to oppose
It could not be stopped
No power sufficient to thwart
Nor force strong enough to suppress

Having fought for survival
Treaded water while tired
Squinted and searched assiduously
For any sign of illumination

Now as the sun rises
Daylight chasing away the shadows
It is finally in clear view
Attainable, tangible, within reach

Dark night and weeping ceased
The dawning of a new day
Delivering joyous relief
It is now visible

...the beginning of greatness

The Beginning

Morning dew on grass as the sun rises

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Another illustration of your incredible gift. Keep up the great work.

Posted on 08/08/2008 at 10:08:30 AM

 
the beginning of greatness... yes you our....artme-some-more-please

Posted on 07/22/2008 at 9:07:24 AM

 
Beautiful, inspirational poem!

Posted on 07/21/2008 at 8:07:34 PM

 
Amazing 5 stars+++++

Posted on 07/21/2008 at 9:07:44 AM

 
This is really strong, well done :) Sheri

Posted on 07/20/2008 at 11:07:26 PM

 
wow!..that was lovely..and I love your picture...you are very talented!!...I would love to put this on our blog

Posted on 07/20/2008 at 5:07:13 AM

 
Very nice! Love it and the photo as well.

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 6:07:09 PM

 
5 stars plus--wonderful!!!

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 5:07:22 PM

 
A new day always presents an opportunity for a new beginning. Thanks for this inspiring poem!

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 5:07:17 PM

 
That was beautiful....i need a poem...i need some encouragement..thank u

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 4:07:35 PM

 
This is incredible. Very uplifting and hopeful...I was encouraged...

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 2:07:20 PM

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