We Make the World Go Round

By D.A. Ashton, published Jul 18, 2008
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Sadness elates my heart

Troubles ease my mind

I beckoned you closer

We joined hands, spent time, laughed

You stripped me of my false sanity

Again I believe, but is it possible

I dream while awake, in clamor

Coldness once filled your dwelling place

My heart elates even with sadness

My mind is at ease with troubles

We changed my life

You became my source

I am no more

We make the world go round

We Make the World Go Round

Happiness and the beach or is it the beach and happiness or is it all the same?

Credit: www.manliftingwoman.com

Copyright: www.manliftingwoman.com

Takeaways
  • Change, people, couple, two, relationship
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Very, very nice...

Posted on 09/05/2008 at 10:09:27 PM

 
I agree with "Artme"..you take me with you !!...you have an amazing gift my friend !!!!

Posted on 07/26/2008 at 11:07:48 AM

 
This is absolutely beautiful.

Posted on 07/21/2008 at 7:07:24 PM

 
Yeah, I think it's all the same too!!

Posted on 07/21/2008 at 10:07:57 AM

 
I love the way you write poem , you take me with you.... KOOL

Posted on 07/19/2008 at 10:07:49 AM

 
Wonderful! I especially liked the line "We changed my life."

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 8:07:27 PM

 
Beautiful!! and btw ~ I think it's all the same :)

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 4:07:47 PM

 
Breathtakingly beautiful!

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 2:07:51 PM

 
mike :)

Posted on 07/18/2008 at 1:07:01 PM

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