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Running to Six Feet Under

By Baconator, published Jul 19, 2008
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Running..

Where does it take you..?

Run from your troubles,

never face a problem,

drown them by running,

store them up,

by making sure they stay

deeply embedded in your brain.

Snorting, huffing, shooting, popping,

it's all the same.

Run and run,

all part of the game.

When will you ever learn to face

the troubles you feel are too much to bear?

After you lose it all?

Six feet under you can't run anymore?

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Creative and thought-provoking poem.

Posted on 08/10/2008 at 10:08:39 AM

 
Love ya! Just LOVE YA!

Posted on 08/03/2008 at 5:08:22 PM

 
Yah know Freakmamma.. and what would life be without bacon.. now I just wish everyone smelled the bacon the same way I do! Thank you everyone for the wonderful comments.

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 12:07:16 PM

 
And when you're six feet under, well, no more bacon either. This was pretty interesting ... lots of ways to interpret it.

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 12:07:05 PM

 
Very nice!! Thanks for sharing

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 8:07:32 AM

 
Very good job!

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 6:07:03 AM

 
Very powerful work !

Posted on 07/24/2008 at 5:07:34 AM

 
How we hurry . . . from the cradle to the grave.

Posted on 07/22/2008 at 4:07:54 PM

 
So true.

Posted on 07/21/2008 at 7:07:51 PM

 
This makes me so sad!

Posted on 07/20/2008 at 3:07:36 PM

 
so true!!..excellent poem!

Posted on 07/20/2008 at 5:07:29 AM

 
so true!!..excellent poem!

Posted on 07/20/2008 at 5:07:06 AM

 
Very powerful, great work!!!!

Posted on 07/20/2008 at 5:07:05 AM

 
wow you go girl!!!

Posted on 07/19/2008 at 7:07:56 PM

 
Great work~!

Posted on 07/19/2008 at 5:07:09 PM

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