Far Away

A Haiku for Dylan in Two Parts

By Louisa Burgess, published Jul 20, 2008
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Missing you grow and
see new things like birds flying
you are far away

Not any where near
all through the spring and summer
you are far away


Far Away
Far Away

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beautiful friend

Posted on 09/15/2008 at 12:09:38 PM

 
Awe.. distance can suck sometimes!

Posted on 07/24/2008 at 6:07:25 PM

 
Very sweet and nice words !

Posted on 07/23/2008 at 11:07:01 AM

 
Heartfelt and sweet!!

Posted on 07/23/2008 at 4:07:49 AM

 
sorry some kink of clinch I can not seem to post any comments either yesterday 7/20 or today 7/21 tried fro two different computers loved this though nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 07/21/2008 at 10:07:10 AM

 
So deep and your grandson is so lucky!!!!

Posted on 07/21/2008 at 9:07:27 AM

 
cool poem :- )

Posted on 07/21/2008 at 8:07:05 AM

 
So thoughtful.

Posted on 07/21/2008 at 6:07:10 AM

 
Nice poem :) Sheri

Posted on 07/20/2008 at 11:07:13 PM

 
How expressive! Great job. Your grandson is fortunate to have you as a grandparent.

Posted on 07/20/2008 at 10:07:45 AM

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