How to Improve Your Writing with Helium's Read and Rate System

Practical Writing Tips Any Online Writer Can Use

If you think sitting around reading page after page of mediocre attempts at article writing and deciding which is the better of the two is a waste of your time, think again. Not only will you gain insight into how others write and what makes interesting reading; you will soon begin to
 think like an editor, or in the case of AC like a Content Manager, and learn techniques to improve your writing as well.

I started out like any other reader, paying careful attention to detail and weighing the merits of each piece, but I soon grew tired of the tedious job of reading article after article over the same topic. My mind began to wander and I found myself skimming for kernels of wisdom to elevate one above the other. Once I got past the hurdle of reading every word and began to look at each piece as a whole, what makes good online writing suddenly became very clear.

The lead to the article is vital. If it is stilted or poorly worded or makes the reader feel like an idiot by providing definitions that any reasonable reader would already know, you will loose your audience. Unless the definition adds something significant to the topic that most readers would not know, don't bother.

Sentence structure should be simple and easy to follow. Complex sentences filled with extraneous information won't hit the mark here. You are writing to inform not trying to show off your command of the English language.

Address the topic upfront and stay on topic. Personal experience is fine, as long as it addresses the topic and illustrates your point. Avoid the tendency to veer off on tangents that do nothing to solidify your point.

Forget about flowery descriptions designed to elicit an emotional reaction. The only emotion I feel when I want to get rid of mice is disgust and anger. I really don't care to hear how cute the mouse was before you caught him. No one else does either. Leave the flowery imagery for prose.

Related information
  • More is not necessarily better. Make the length fit the piece.
  • Never insult your readers with definitions they can reasonably be expected to know.
  • Leave flowery imagery to prose.
 
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Excellent advice for online writing. I will definitely be sure to pay more attention when I read for Helium. Thank you.

Posted on 04/06/2009 at 9:04:39 PM

I like Helium, but haven't done much work there since the major enhancements they made. These are excellent tips! I think I'll pick back up and see what happens. Thanks!

Posted on 12/01/2008 at 6:12:10 AM

What IS the helium program, and is there a link to it available?

Posted on 11/22/2008 at 10:11:21 AM

Another very helpful article. Thanks so much. I will look into Helium.

Posted on 11/21/2008 at 9:11:24 AM

Helium does tend to get tedious at times, but your tips have given me a new way to look at writing. Thanks for the tips.

Posted on 09/22/2008 at 9:09:48 PM

Thank you for an interesting and useful article. I will definitely give this a try! : ) (By the way, you know you have been reading online too long when you glance at the AC Now Hiring Ad to the left, as I just did, and think that they are hiring Medieval Software Engineers! LOL! )

Posted on 09/14/2008 at 3:09:47 AM

Thanks for good information and a reminder of what writers should be doing.

Posted on 08/04/2008 at 11:08:02 PM

Words of wisdom for witing as a whole. Good points!

Posted on 07/26/2008 at 12:07:50 PM

Excellent article! I never looked at Helium, maybe I will now.

Posted on 07/23/2008 at 8:07:20 PM

Great insights. I signed up for Helium but never wrote for them. I can see now, though, how just rating and comparing the articles can be a valuable exercise for a writer.

Posted on 07/23/2008 at 11:07:05 AM

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