Divorce and Daddy's Girl

For the Love of Daddy's Little Girl

By M.G. Laskey, published Nov 22, 2006
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In his eyes alone
shes capable of no wrong
neither is he able to do in her own
Tightly does she string
that thread that binds &
sweetly does she smile all the while
In the twinkle of her eyes
dad's love is reflected
yet they speak no warmth
to the mother rejected
Emotions controlled by confusion
Leave her mind clouded with
fear and delusion
Swelling up with judgment and hate
the daughter retaliates
Not knowing what more to do
mom whispers one more "I love you"!
she kisses daddy's little girl goodbye
waiting till theyre out of sight to cry


In Their Shadow

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This really moved me, I linked to you on my blog....Hope that is okay. http://divorcekitncomfort.blogspot.com/2007/04/touching-poem-on-daddys-girl.html

Posted on 04/28/2007 at 5:04:00 PM

 
It is a very touching poem and shows great depth for the little girl's feelings that are still alive in a grown girl's body.

Posted on 04/25/2007 at 2:04:00 PM

 
This is a really wonderful poem portraying the sentiments so well.

Posted on 03/22/2007 at 2:03:00 PM

 
i have 3 girls all are daddy's little angels. Its easy to relate to.

Posted on 02/23/2007 at 1:02:00 AM

 
its a good poem.

Posted on 02/23/2007 at 1:02:00 AM

 
Wow this is touching! Me being a Daddy's girl until I got a step Mom :)... I can relate. Then on the flipside, I want my daughter to be a Daddy's girl, in which she isn't. Very good...

Posted on 02/04/2007 at 11:02:00 PM

 
poignant and touching

Posted on 02/02/2007 at 7:02:00 AM

 
Very nice! I am impressed with the tender quality also.

Posted on 01/15/2007 at 12:01:00 PM

 
Written by the mother. Thank you.

Posted on 12/27/2006 at 4:12:00 PM

 
such a tender poem, either by one who is the mother or the child, or both, very well expressed.

Posted on 12/07/2006 at 8:12:00 AM

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