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a Old Woman- Looking at Her Life

By Artme, published Jul 24, 2008
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WITHDRAWING DOWN
THE MIDDLE OF THE DAY
BECAUSE YOU'VE not here

LAUGH LINES
IN CHARMS
UNDER HER EYES

BLACK INK
THE MANY POEMS DYE
MY HAIR Red

HUCKLEBERRY JAMS
ALL THE DISILLUSIONMENT
UP IN a JAM JAR

ASLEEP
SURROUNDED BY THINGS
THAT DON'T SLEEP

ARTME - HAIKU WRITING

a old woman- looking at her life..


a Old Woman- Looking at Her Life

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Credit: Mary Davis

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nice :)

Posted on 07/27/2008 at 6:07:14 PM

 
interesting thoughts

Posted on 07/26/2008 at 3:07:34 AM

 
cool

Posted on 07/26/2008 at 12:07:48 AM

 
I loved this the art in words and paint !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 07/26/2008 at 12:07:36 AM

 
This is so cute love it!!!!!!!!

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 4:07:22 PM

 
This is soooo cute !!....:)

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 2:07:55 PM

 
When you get old you need to get used to being alone.. it makes the music sound better.

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 2:07:19 AM

 
Excellent !! I am getting used to this kind of reflection myself !!

Posted on 07/24/2008 at 8:07:05 PM

 
Great job.

Posted on 07/24/2008 at 6:07:15 PM

 
This is so beautiful....

Posted on 07/24/2008 at 5:07:07 PM

 
Wonderful poem; wonderful art!

Posted on 07/24/2008 at 2:07:20 PM

 
Loved this and the photo also!!

Posted on 07/24/2008 at 2:07:38 PM

 
LOL Sounds a lot like me, Artme !! Well, not quite. Great job on this!

Posted on 07/24/2008 at 1:07:45 PM

 
No this is about and old lady i saw at walmart

Posted on 07/24/2008 at 1:07:54 PM

 
Nice!

Posted on 07/24/2008 at 12:07:38 PM

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