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Lament for the Son of Usnech

By Norman A. Rubin, published Jul 25, 2008
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When sun sets down the Mountains of Kerry and follows the River Shanon to the mighty Atlantic, the Emerald Isle shines to the sparkle of the myriad of stars and the rays of the moon. Along the plains filled with peatbogs and heaths magic makes its appearance in the cool of the evening; sweet smelling grasses sway to and fro with the spirit of the faeries. Little people raise themselves from the mosses and lichens and go along their busy ways in gathering the gold for their crock near the sparkling coloured rainbow; the spirits whisper their count in the Gaelic tongue of old.

The peaceful evenings with brilliant lit heavens, at one time in the recent past, shone on a lantern lit cottage in the county of Limerick. Blind Eamus McNaught had his little cottage which he shared with his devoted wife Mary Ellen; a woman faithful to him even when sight was deprived. A bonny bairn of a lass was her gift to him and she cared for the both of her charges equally.

Eamus McNaught's sight was in the soft touch of the pretty features and red hair of his Mary Ellen; his lips accepted the full warmth of his wife's affection, and her hug with her slim and gracious body added its charms. He took pleasure in the sound of the cooing and gurling of chubby little Daphne. The two wonderful creatures were a blessing in his life, and he never forgot in the Sunday mass to offer his prayers for them.

Eamus McNaught's gift to his Mary Ellen and little Daphne was the tunes played on his fiddle and sung by his tenor voice in the cool of the evenings. The playing on the strings was an inheritance from his father to his younger son, and Eamus's rendered songs had the blessed semblance of his sweet-voiced mother. Both the father and mother of Eamus McNaught lived the remainder of their golden years in the loving care of the Sisters of Charity in their convent nearby.

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Like the song of Soleman your stories express the beauty of God in a simple but delightful manner. Thank You fer sharin'. Mizpah. ;-}}>

Posted on 08/29/2008 at 8:08:42 AM

 
What a wonderful story...........Thank you for pointing it out to me. You are a very gifted story teller and writer.

Posted on 08/23/2008 at 12:08:48 PM

 
This is an excellent story. I feel as if I've visited Ireland. You must be very well-traveled.

Posted on 08/02/2008 at 6:08:18 AM

 
my friend Charlene Collins told me that I would love your work, and I certainly do. Ireland is the land of my son's ancestors, Roach is our last name, we are here in Canada and no little about the UK, but the magic that is Ireland has always captured our hearts and soul. I am new to AC, I am waiting for my first submission to be published. I definitely want to subscribe to your content and I hope that you would want to do the same with mine.

Posted on 07/30/2008 at 1:07:00 PM

 
Excellent read. You've captured the spirit of the Irish folktale perfectly. I'm looking forward to perusing the rest of your work.

Posted on 07/28/2008 at 6:07:42 AM

 
This is the most melodic piece of prose I have ever read!

Posted on 07/27/2008 at 4:07:32 PM

 
I enjoyed the story very much......but too bad it's a sad ending!

Posted on 07/27/2008 at 12:07:11 PM

 
Very nice once again superb!!!!!!

Posted on 07/26/2008 at 6:07:53 PM

 
Thanks for sharing this great story!

Posted on 07/26/2008 at 5:07:09 PM

 
Very enjoyable story. You did it again! Thank you for sharing.

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 10:07:49 PM

 
Great work, Norman!

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 9:07:03 PM

 
Great job! I was a little surprised because in the beginning I was picturing something a little more back in time, but it was a sad surprise to realize that it was taking place in a more recent era. It is also sad to think that a good man that gave and had so much lost it all in such a tragic, slow and excruciating death, a truly tragic tale.

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 3:07:22 PM

 
Excellent work`!

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 11:07:45 AM

 
Well written, but another sad one.

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 8:07:46 AM

 
Ahhh....Yet another well-written story, set in the Emerald Isle...My Irish side is beaming! Thanks Norman!

Posted on 07/25/2008 at 8:07:17 AM

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