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Dedicated to Loren Moore: Another Buck Story

By Carol Roach, published Aug 29, 2008
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This story was originally published in my e-zine Storytime Tapestry and gather.com

Loren Moore was an Internet writer and friend of mine. He was read worldwide. When he was still living he created a series about his dog, Buck. He wrote many of these stories; and many of his Buck stories were contributions from his Internet friends. This is my contribution to the Buck series. Though fictional, I am sure you will enjoy it.

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The strange man knocked on the door of the second story flat on a snowy
Montreal morning in early January.

"Who is it?" yelled the grandmother but no answer came.

The incessant knocking continued. There was no getting around it: this
stranger was not going away. Slowly the grandmother walked to the door
with caution. As an older woman living alone with her granddaughter she
knew she was a prime target for criminals who prey on the innocent.

"Who is it?" she asked one more time as she approached the door.

"Listen lady," said the voice from the exterior, "I don't have much time I

have other deliveries to make, you know."

Now totally bewildered, the grandmother opened the door just wide
enough for the deliveryman to push a paper on a clipboard through the crack.

"Sign here," he commanded. She obliged and passed the clipboard back to
him. "Wait here as I go to the truck and get your package madame. Sure is a bitter cold morning, ain't it?"

Package; what package? Who could be sending her a package and why, she wondered. "I wonder if my granddaughter had anything to do with this one," she pondered. But she would have to wait another three hours before the granddaughter came home from school to quiz her about it.

The deliveryman returned to the door and handed her a large, cold steel
chain, which happened to be attached to a big, black, goofy lab and off he
went.

By this time her own dogs, a German shepherd, and a cocker spaniel, were
barking their fool heads off. The goofy looking lab sat on the top step and
refused to budge. Try as she might she couldn't get the lab to come into the house. Yet she couldn't leave him on the stairs that she shared with her
neighbour, either.

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harmander my stories are in a book, two books

Posted on 10/09/2008 at 5:10:01 PM

 
Well, you see your stories are so original and touchy that it needs an effort from all of us to see it as a book and I am sure that one day it will be so. Amen Suma Amen!

Posted on 10/09/2008 at 7:10:07 AM

 
thanks becky, the trouble is it takes too long to write a book, and I have to see a profit in it which I don't at the moment.

Posted on 10/08/2008 at 9:10:52 AM

 
thanks Stephanie

Posted on 10/08/2008 at 9:10:41 AM

 
thanks Meg

Posted on 10/08/2008 at 9:10:05 AM

 
Oh Carol this is a beautiful story. I loved it...You really should make this one into a children book. I htink they would enjoy it as well.

Posted on 10/04/2008 at 10:10:12 PM

 
Wonderful story, wonderful tribute to Loren!

Posted on 10/04/2008 at 9:10:10 AM

 
Wonderful story! I love a good dog story.

Posted on 10/04/2008 at 9:10:02 AM

 
Nice article Carol

Posted on 10/04/2008 at 5:10:27 AM

 
thank you so much teresa

Posted on 08/31/2008 at 2:08:28 AM

 
What a tender hearted story. I loved it! A fitting tribute to your friend.

Posted on 08/31/2008 at 2:08:13 AM

 
thank you Norman

Posted on 08/30/2008 at 2:08:59 AM

 
thanks again, Charlotte

Posted on 08/30/2008 at 2:08:13 AM

 
You continue to amuse me with your fine writing - now a sweet story about a dog called buck...

Posted on 08/29/2008 at 10:08:29 PM

 
awwwww how sweet! Great article! :-)

Posted on 08/29/2008 at 8:08:04 PM

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